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war is a devils game by ~vinnyval:iconvinnyval:



The battlefield was gray and dry with the effect of the war, cold wind blowing the trees made them sway in air. I could see the many injured leaving the battle and some too weak to move from where they lay.

I could here the sounds of the gunshots and bombs, a tremor of wounded men seconds away from death. What horrid moans the soldiers made as they slowly silenced to their eternal, peaceful, slumber.

As time passed on, I still stayed. I stayed by his side as he smiled, trying to reassure me that he was okay. A feeling came… It was cold and wet as it ran down my face. Bitterly, I wiped it away from my eyes; still it kept coming. He knew he was going to pass on. He was young and not ready to die, but he was a true soldier with pride. However, dieing for this country is really just not worth it.

Death was slowly capturing him. His eyes were as innocent as a newborn baby. The smile on his face stayed constant, even when in pain. I held his hand as he breathed his last breath and that feeling came again, swelling inside as cold wet tears began to fall again.
©2008-2009 ~vinnyval
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this is something i did in English not so long ago i hope you like

AND THNX TO MY FREIND FOR EDITING IT AND THAT IS :iconpaopudestiny: so thnx :3
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sorry if theres spelling errors

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my watchers have the coolest and most talented art
That was really good...and sad...nice work!

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"I don't care what you are doing...so much as the idiotic way you are doing it...."

~Vincent Valentine~
oh thankies :3

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No problem.

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"I don't care what you are doing...so much as the idiotic way you are doing it...."

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weeeeee tis awesome so ur ownig me in english too also ther is some gramma mistakes

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Even a super cool ninja needs to take a break:ninjaeat:

i love my family espesially my wife! :heart: :glomp:

*Neo-Orginization Join them whahahaha
icon created by my wifey ~xhollehx
well so and yes i own

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That flippin' owned! :XD: :XD: It has some beautiful sentences! I personally like the innocence like a newborn baby part. :yum: lol. Although there are some grammer mistakes it was very, very good. :aww: Like the only things wrong is like run-on sentences and like spaces and stuff. Other than that, it's fine. :D

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NikNack rocks my polka dotted Christmas toe socks! :noes:

Apparently, vampires play baseball because they're that super-special-sparkly-assed awesome. =|

I happen to be a sophisticated weirdo with a master's degree in idiocy and bother.
Woah... I've got chills... that's really good... It's beautiful in a deep, sad way.

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If you had any idea how crazy and exciting I really am, you'd spontaneously combust... I'm saving lives by acting boring!
thnx thats why i like it

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